My Carolina

I love these places.

Through fictions and fantasies,
I've been there for centuries.
I can talk of rednecks and white porpoises.
I dream of cottages on bays.
God I breathe in the scent of shrimps,
from the seas of South Carolina.

Ravens, music.
Family, friends.
Together and forever in a
One Tree Hill, in North Carolina.

Author's Note

Oneday I'll see these places.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I've traveled the United States extensively and I have to say that I love my home state of North Carolina more than most any place I've been. We have the oldest mountains in the world and pristine beaches on the Outer Banks. We have historical landmarks and a friendly population for the most part. It's a good place to live and raise a family. I enjoyed your poem here.

[Junert]

I only read of these places and I love them so much, it's like I've been there. Thank you for shedding more light on it for me.

[Junert]

Thanks dear.

[success]

when are you taking me there? lolx..great piece

[Shaquana Adams]

I really like how you wrote this. Even as a northern girl, I can appreciate this poem. Nicely penned!
-QuanaWana

[Junert]

Thanks dear.

[BL]

Nice work, like the places you took me

[BriBri]

And now because of you the reader would like to see these places

[Junert]

I hope they do, then they can tell me more about those places.

[Dominique Lambright]

Nice :) vivid and very peaceful it seems :)

[Junert]

Thanks dear. It's been a while.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the Carolina. It is beautiful country still. Filled with good people and beauty. You honored her with the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cassy Samuels]

Nice piece. You certainly love carolina..or was it Wizkids song??...lol

[Junert]

I doubt i'v heard wizkid's song. I read about North and South Carolina in the Prince of Tides and One tree hill. I fell inlove lol

[Cassy Samuels]

lol...nice

[Joshua Lean]

I enjoyed this. Simple yet well written. Fire on.

[Junert]

Thank you dear.

[Sami Khalil]

I like North and South Carolina's alot...Bravo