My Mate, My Friend 2

James wants to avenge his wife's death. The problem is the murderers are his friend's sons.

"I changed to my beast form ready to harm whatever was scaring her. It was unlike her to get scared of a fellow beast. She was scared of them because she loved them. Because she'd let them into her privacy. She switched to human quick enough to get just the first arrow in her thigh. She'd thought they'd stop if they knew it was no animal. I hid in the bushes sure they wouldn't harm her. Then they laughed. Each gazing for her evergreen eyes. What great players they were at the dart game they were playing. I'd crushed them there and then but their weapons were many and I was not close. I wanted to live to avenge it. It'll be a way of honouring her. I'd turned back to human but not before they got her n*****s stucked to her ribcage. " Nikky." I called and they run. Not knowing I saw them. And confused about me being one or not. You came there to find me over the naked body of mywife. Dead. I said someone might have shot her accidentally and left out of whatever because the arrows I'd already pulled out. Each night I know why she is no more and why I am. Each night my wolf yearn for the death of her murderers. Each night I come to your house and watch them sleep soundly. Then I remind myself of whom they were. Your sons. And you, the only who loved me beside Nikky. Each night I spare them, I had to kill another to sate the hunger of my wolf. I left TERROR PACK because I was being forced to kill. I came here, and for six months I've been forced to kill. Your sons forced me to take the lives of your neighbours " THEY JUST HUGGED.

Author's Note

Now that it is complete, I hope for an honest feedback.

Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

I think it is great :) It's clearly your story and you made it your own :)

[Junert]

Guess I did. Thank you.

[MR.RANDLE]

Hey Junert i just read your piece and i see thats its very creative and that you are allowing allthe characters to come together i think its very interesting...