Fade into the mist

Shaped in lights but its fading away now

As the sky dims into dark

I remember the sun

Lost to the time I’m entranced

To that place where

Our heartbeats versed one rhythm

Soft colors, the sun’s caress

As we set sail coast across

The endless sea, the sentiments

Words spoken in a lips’ curl

And a song drifted on the wind

I wish I could put down

In phrase, the lavender evening

Lured into those battling lashes

A glint masked in the tunnel

And in the mid of confusions

The smile in your lips

 

But the sun has set

And like the cold wind

In the springtime

It fades into the mist

As the evening breathes in

The seas turn to deserts

I sit and witness it grow faint

And evade into the mist

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

thanks for the reviews

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

very soft delicate and beautiful.........like ocean breeze......
refreshing poem.
very well written......
i loved it!!!
:)

[prachi prangya agasti]

thanks so much :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Asb]

one of the most beautiful pieces i have read', makes me want to learn writing from you, great job...cheers!!

[prachi prangya agasti]

thanks..... :)

[Arshia]

very nicely written..I loved the way you've illustrated the nature! :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

thanks so much... :)

[kublakhan27]

I love how the 'seas turn to deserts'...a perfect metaphor for the poignancy and the sense of loss that pervades this one...painfully beautiful and vividly expressed...nicely done :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

Thanks ........:-)

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[Frieda P]

A bittersweet hush, this is really luverly prachi.

'Our heartbeats versed one rhythm' Adore that line, wish I had written it. Great job here.

[prachi prangya agasti]

thanks... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and gentle poem. The poem felt like whisper.
"As we set sail coast across
The endless sea, the sentiments
Words spoken in a lips’ curl"
The above lines were my favorite. I liked the ending also. You left the reader with a very good closure. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[prachi prangya agasti]

Thanks so much... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.