A kaleidoscope of memories

i think memories just come back like flashes.... but he never does...

when it's all over

sometimes it just comes back

like flashes playing over and over

a story starts

like every time with

once upon a time

credits roll memories last

like stronger than reality

in different colors 

in different shapes

mental snapshots changing focus

brings us back

just like a fairy-tale

but life still stands around

while we stumble in a kaleidoscope

bluish grayish waves

music plays an enduring melody

stars move in circles

coloring my drunken hopes

like a picturescape

but life still stands around

while we stumble in a kaleidoscope

Author's Note

thanks for the reviews.... :)

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

while we stumble in a kaleidoscope
bluish grayish waves
music plays an enduring melody
stars move in circles
coloring my drunken hopes
like a picturescape
but life still stands around
while we stumble in a kaleidoscope

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Lovely write. I liked it a lot :) especially the flow and choice of words got my attention
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[prachi prangya agasti]

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[Leslie Philibert]

Like the rich use of language !

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[kublakhan27]

but life still stands around / while we stumble in a kaleidoscope...I love these lines, they say so much...a powerful and heartfelt piece, well done :)

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[A. Amos]

but life still stands around
while we stumble in a kaleidoscope

Great write and above verses was amazing...

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[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. We can try to forget. Good and bad will stay with us somewhere hidden in the back of the mind. Reappear at-will. I like the logical thoughts in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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