And when you misunderstand

Misunderstandings shakes the relationship and eventually kills it

Chests rise and fall as I see
no judgement in your eyes
a jerk back, a blank stare
words stuck in the throat
tears roll down
but ignorance of your heart
stabs right me hard
when you misunderstand, truth lies
when you misunderstand, love sides
And when you misunderstand you never know
the trust knitted so strong
the love embraced so tender
shake and die a million death

The way you make me feel
slips your heart
words withdraw shut in a tight jaw
I cry so hard and wish
for once you could see through
my smile that lasted
has shaken off with tears
but whispers leaps, land with a bruise
when you misunderstand the truth lies
when you misunderstand the love sides
and when you misunderstand you never know
the trust knitted so strong
the love embraced so tender
shake and die a million death

Everytime you question I break
everytime your faith dangles I shatter
I want to know your
when, how and why's
where your worries go at the end
but you never see the truth beneath
the love that awaits in me
the trust that I have never broken
and when you misunderstand you never know
the trust knitted so strong
the love embraced so tender
shake and die a million death

Author's Note

Thank you for your reviews.....

Reviews

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

"when you misunderstand the truth lies
when you misunderstand the love sides
and when you misunderstand you never know
the trust knitted so strong
the love embraced so tender
shake and die a million death."

Brilliant lines

[prachi prangya agasti]

thanks so much.... :)

[Frieda P]

Trust issues will surely kill a relationship, you've pen'd it so aptly....those last four lines could stand alone, well done prachi.

[prachi prangya agasti]

thanks so much ...:)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure. :-)

[ayosonolowo]

Nice poem from a nice writer, liked the written

[prachi prangya agasti]

thanks....

[Pradeep Nair]

One of the most beautiful work, i have recently gone through..
All efforts have been taken to bring out the real aspects on the stage.

The first few lines, suffocates the reader with the suitable proportions aimed to achieve the taste and feel... then ..

"Everytime you question I break
everytime your faith dangles I shatter " ----> magnificent..... you shake and wake the sleeping senses.

And a true beautiful ending....
Ending or the beginning...

looking for more from you..
Thanks.

[prachi prangya agasti]

Thanks..... :-)