The Earthmaker's Passionate Love

The God I know and love knows and loves me, so I wrote Him a poem to show what that love is like.

is as soft as the breeze before the sea

is more furious than the waves that crash before me

it shows itself in so many places

and has many expressions, multiple faces

with which to communicate,

patient, even while i struggle to wait...

it folds over in pain

all for my sake

its tears blend in with the rain

its heart shatters with the force of an earthquake

Reviews

[Aura]

That's a beautiful message Juliah how you express your love for God in this poem. I definitely find your format for this poem interesting, as it's centered and in red font which is cool! I like this last line "it's heart shatters with the force of an earthquake". Thanks for sharing!

[Juliah B]

Yeah, red is typically the color of passion and love, so it seemed fitting. I originally wrote this as His love for me, but it goes both ways, actually. Thanks for reading, and for the thoughts!

[Aura]

You are most welcome!