Pills

A poem that's about what I went through

I flew to the moon
‘till my soul left my body to swoon
and I talked to the man in the stars
He told me I was wasting my time and to fly on to mars
So I flew to the sun
Letting my mind leave my body to run
I suffered so many burns
it was easy to learn
that I should fall to my knees on the ground
So I crashed to the ocean where my love I had drowned
But instead was washed away in the typhoon
Beached upon land and suffocating on air lost in the dunes
I waited while I healed my scars
Catching my fallen tears in shattered glass jars
After all I had said and all I had done
I had lost all my friends and found myself to be a lonesome one
So I burst from my grave laughing away all concerns
And then I found that I had finally returned

Author's Note

You can sorta interpret this poem how you'd like

Reviews

[Rosette]

Ah my dear Juliet it was lovely! My favorite line..
"Catching my fallen tears in shattered glass jars"
Hn. I see drug habits when I read this and it is called pills but I'm not sure. What was it exactly? Great mystery and fantasy throughout this entire thing.

[Chris]

It isn't how WE see you that matters... it's all about how YOU see you. Seems a bit fractured.