Our Love

The book of our love
Was written in heavens above.
When somewhere very far
We were born in the stars.
So when you came to me
The universe lit up in glee.
It was beautiful for a time.
Our joy was in its prime.
Till you put yourself first and-
The bubble of our dear love burst.

Author's Note

I hope I got the feeling out there to some extent.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

A most convincing poem on relationships and the inevitable way they go. I loved this very relatable poem.

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem declaring we cannot escape from fate. Nicely written

[Sami Khalil]

Very nice poem. Romantic
Far and stars do not rhyme
Far and star rhyme

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description of how love can come alive in our hearts dear Julie.
"The book of our love
Was written in heavens above.
When somewhere very far
We were born in the stars"
The above lines could stand alone. I do believe. The stars and the moon keep the memory of love alive in the secret whispers of the sea. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote