You

Ever find someone interesting but you also hate them? Its annoying. I found this poem in a journal from a year ago, no feelings resurface, but somehow my mind still recognizes that previous season.

I've learned to hate you

although you intrigue me 

I know it's jealousy 

it sounds cheesy

I hate you 

and you don't care 

I hate you

and it's my despair 

so go on with your day 

and leave me alone 

but how could you 

when we are so close 

you are my friend 

but I hate you the most 

you are my friend 

and its nothing to boast 

you are my friend 

and I'm still trying to cope 

that although you are my friend 

our friendship's a joke.

Author's Note

does it flow well enough?

Reviews

[Chris]

It flows like life... we give the title "friend" with so little thought and are so surprised when we realize they weren't.

[Chris Shaw]

There’s s fine line between love and hate. This poem was a tightrope walk. Sometimes it!s better to walk away.

Chris

[ogirhsog]

The rhyme and rhythm are a bit broken, and it's ratehr hard to recognize just what this poem is about, but it's not too bad. Is it about unrequited love, or just a lousy friend?

[Julissa Pena]

a person who was considered a very good friend of mine started to treat me in a very harsh manner but acted as if it was normal so I started getting very aggravated- the difference in attitude is astonishing but I'm over it now.

[Ruby]

Seems like an unrequited love to me . But it's good