My Secret Password

Some times the most mundane moments can become something so amazing that you feel silly for thinking of any moment spent with that person as anything other than perfect. Some times people have words that act as a kind of password to break down walls they

You're scared

I can feel it

In your touch

In the air around us

 

You're scared

I can see it

In your eyes

In your posture

 

There's nothing wrong

I promise

Why are you so afraid of me?

 

I lean closer towards you

Laying my head on your shoulder

 

You're scared

I can hear it

Your heart is racing

 

Don't be afraid

I won't hurt you

Why are you so afraid of me?

 

You lean in towards me

Lifting my face

Your touch soft

Yet

Your hands tremble

 

Our eyes meet

Your gaze so penitrating

 

I see your fear

 

You whisper

Four simple words

 

"Can I keep you?"

 

 

Author's Note

When I wrote this my heart was pounding 1000000 beats a second so forgive me if it's a little bit of a tough read. I'm a hopless romantic at heart and Casper is one of my favorite movies of all time. I've never told anyone my secret password. I hope this was as enjoyable for you as it was for me and that one day you all find someone who knows the "password" without the little hint box.

Reviews

[Lalli]

beka, you really cpatured the moment of first love with this one. The moment brings the 100000 beats a second heartbeat, it brings the anxiety, the conerned questions, the fearfulness, and the cherishing of romantic gestures and words. snap snap darlin!

don't chang ea word, and i agree 100% the password without the lil h int box. ;-p

much love n respect

-Lalli

[Kelley]

I don't think it was tough to read??? I loved this and it kind of reminded me of a vampire movie where the vampire is asking for trust......smile Am I crazy thinking this.....lol
Great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[ANNA]

This is sweet. Though I feel you bring so much it makes my heart beat 1000000 beats per sec. Wonderful write. Please don't ever stop writing what you feel. Because your sooo good at it!

Much love n respect,
Anna

[Mr. Lopez]

Wow ! Girl ! You are a sweet one. He's scared of how you can shatter his heart into a kabillion pieces is why! I was really moved by this piece . young love is sooo cool. The fear , the anxiety, the uneasy discomfort of doubt mixed with hormones and emotional need for connection. I really was moved by this....not just an attempt to sound impressed. I was falling in love all over again. Thanks.