Confused

Everyone...or most people...have had someone in their life that they had potential to be something with...but it didn't work out....

 

 

I'm not quite sure how this came about

Once apon a time you were all I wanted

Now I'm not so sure

I don't know what happend

To those feelings

I still care

But everything has changed

For me

I've changed

I'm not that

Scared

Lost

Lonely

Litle girl

Anymore

I don't quite know how to tell you

All of this

But I don't want to belong to you

Anymore

You had a chance

I wasn't who you wanted

You can only push someone away so much

Before they walk out on their own

Forever

Author's Note

This is more of a trying to figure out whats going on in my head type thing then anything else. Although I do enjoy it. Please share your thoughts. Lovely to hear..as Always.

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

These emotions are normal and are just part of growing into yourself. The only advice that i can give is to be honest to the person on the other end of this emotion. A heart is a delacate thing to play with. Give him the consideration as a human soul that feels both pain and joy. By prolonging the inevitable you only increase the pain and difficulty to sever ties.
Very nice thought prose.

[ShantaeMarlinda]

This is lovely. I can most definately relate right now. It seems like there's alot of uncertainty in the beginning and it transitions into a sense of being fed up. "You can only push someone away so much before they walk out on their own". I love the strength behind that line. Wonderful piece.

[Gema]

I really like it! It's true emotions and feeling! I like the way you set it out as well! It is like a voice over of your thoughts well done and carry on writing!

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

so much pain within your heart. im sorry for your sorrow. this poem has turned out to be such a great piece of work. great job.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Emotions are normal and many people including me can relate to this situation. Sounds like a recent breakup for me.

Just a couple errors, I noticed:
apon = upon
happend = happened
litle = little

Other than that, a great write.

[ANNA]

I think when you write it so powerful! You can just passionately write one word and it comes to life! I love this and I'm going to add this to my library!! The one to break it all up. Beautiful work..Keep writing because if you stop. What will come of the person you are now! Please write a book soon!! Your toooo good to just have them on the website that only so many see. But I happy you are on here so keep it
Love your poems

Much love n respect,
Anna

[Lydia]

I can definitely relate to this.
I love how you portray the confusion by breaking up the lines so that it's read like haphazard thoughts.

Very nice ;]