This is what it is

Im feeling down. Stuck in a rut...So I wrote about it! (Possible song lyrics in the making!)

Escape; leave the rut, the routine.

This is what I want.

Make a change; move on, clean up.

This is what I want.

Change my way, my pain, and this game.

This is what I want.

 

But what I want isn’t what it is.

And what it is, is a common game.

And the common game, is a game you don’t want to get stuck in.

Cause when you get stuck…you never get out.

 

Escape; never, always stuck.

This is what it is.

Make a change; hardly, never moving on.

This is what it is.

Change my way; it was never my way…only yours.

This is what it is.

Reviews

[M.M.I]

Indecisive in a good way. It leaves the reader to draw a conclusion without one being implied.

[al25]

Like the ending to the poem. And i really like how it changes from this is what i want to this is what it is. Great write :)

[Hunter Jaine McCarthy]

very pretty I like it

[wafa]

it can be a hip hop song^_^, our writings are all about our feelings and emotions, thanks for sharing,

i like it/
Cause when you get stuck…you never get out.

[roarke]

poetry like mind maps is a great way to work things through. Just stop playing the game, that's a start. And remember, it's not what you want that makes you fat, it's what you get.....

oh, and it is what it is. good write.

[Cherrie Palmer]

blaze a trail into a new day