Prologue: Charlie

Got this from my journal....I don't really know where im goin with this sooo....Hang in there with me!

Prologue: Charlie

I used to believe that the world was wonderful, and full of magical creatures. I still believe in the creatures, Mystical beings that hunt in the night, who hold power in their hands like it takes no effort at all. But I discovered that the world is only wonderful when you exclude the wars and hate, racism and malice some of these creatures are the source of the bad in the world. But others are the good guys who don’t believe in making mortal into play things. Fooling with our emotions, and irrationalities. Humans are flawed and some immortals will use this against use. But some are out to save the world.

I’m on a mission, to help them.

Reviews

[KAREN]

Off to a great start!!

[Cherrie Palmer]

this is a good into

[Linear]

Fantasy writing is good if you do it well, so keep on keeping on

[E.H. Monroe]

like the beginning of an 80's action show.

I'd read on

[Dream Weaver]

A couple of grammatical errors, with that being said
this could be a very interesting write…