Make Me Standout

Make Me Standout

A Poem by JulieNorell
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Lyrics I wrote awhile back! I love it!

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Tryin’ so hard just to get a break but everybody’s stompin’ on my dreams. All that they see is a pretty face but they don’t see the real me, but I guess I’ll just have to cross my fingers until that dream comes around.

Chorus

When am I gonna wake up from this nightmare of bein’ a nobody when am I gonna find somebody out there to make me a somebody just another face in the crowd can somebody make me stand out.

© 2011 JulieNorell


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Reminds me of the lyrics of Tom Petty's excellent song: Of course the song and your lyrics have little in common, except that at one point we are all nothing to this world but a face in the crowd. I must ask: Are you a lyrics writer, or do you also create music?

Before all of this ever went down
in another place, another town,
you were just a face in the crowd
out in the street walking around
A face in the crowd
Out of a dream, out of the sky
into my heart, into my life
And you were just a face in the crowd
out in the street, thinking out loud
A face in the crowd

Mark

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i really dig this...the chorus.... perfect... you dont even need words....let the music sing... i really dont do reviews but i had to leave my mark.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Reminds me of the lyrics of Tom Petty's excellent song: Of course the song and your lyrics have little in common, except that at one point we are all nothing to this world but a face in the crowd. I must ask: Are you a lyrics writer, or do you also create music?

Before all of this ever went down
in another place, another town,
you were just a face in the crowd
out in the street walking around
A face in the crowd
Out of a dream, out of the sky
into my heart, into my life
And you were just a face in the crowd
out in the street, thinking out loud
A face in the crowd

Mark

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow awesome work! I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


its like a wish of being a known stranger in a crowded room and I am sure you will make the perfect known stranger....
nicely penned wish!

Posted 13 Years Ago


good job! i loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


excellent lyrics! i was actually looking around to hear them in some song...i think they would sound beautiful on music!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well now, lets see, may I please have this dance with thee, for you're never just a face in that crowd, come take my hand, lets take a twirll, now you stand out, now can you see for now you are dancing with me.
lovely work

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it! Bet music will sound good with this, love the flow!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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