Now I Know

Just some lyrics I wrote in my journal. I don't really know how to finish this one :/ Sorry :P

I used to believe that I was good until I met you baby, and now I know the truth.

 I’m just a devil in disguise,

 Just a cloud in the sky. Hiding the brilliance of the sun.

 I am the shadows in your life keepin’ your light from shining through and now I must go.

Reviews

[Robin]

the shadow of self-realization cast upon a lover

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow short and sweet. Enough is well said in this piece. Very nice work.

[Kaitlyn]

Aww! i like it!

[*skittlez*]

make it longer a little but love it and add puncuation to it

[Lilly Negoi]

i don't think you need more in this poem. it stands up very well as it is.

[Hollow Man]

'And now I must go' and that's how it always ends. great write.

kgs

[KAREN]

Like it! Finish this and let me know, because this if a well written piece!!
I'm just a devil in disguise, love it!

[roarke]

the ol' "it's not you, it's me" thing. Trouble is, the shadows never leave of their own accord. Interesting concept well framed.

[Dream Weaver]

A wicked little ditty...that must have an ending...