Wanting It All

Wanting It All

A Poem by Julie Dant

 

 

 

 

         Wanting It All

 

 

I love you.

I want you.

 

I want you to love me

I want you to need me above all others

I want you to think of me in all your quiet periods.

 

I want to be right there behind your eyes,

Attach myself to your retinas so that

when you are walking in a woods

you are seeing it through my eyes also.

 

I want to be right there in your heart

Pillow myself so that wherever you are

it will swell with such loving fullness that

you might think it could burst with the joy of it.

 

I want to be right there in your brain

Embed myself so that I am there at the

forefront of your mind at all times and you will

feel such peacefulness knowing of my residence.

 

I want to be right there upon your skin

Apply myself as a soothing balm so that when

you pass your hand over any portion of your body

I will feel your touch and know it’s gentleness.

 

 I will love you until the end of all

that we will ever know.

Unconditionally.

 

 

© 2008 Julie Dant


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I have read some dedicated people, but never have I
read, heard, seen such devotion in writing.
This is perhaps a requirment when writing of love, just
quote nearly any part of your poem and the writer will
have defined loyalty.
Normally my reviews get a little wordy, but I am so carried
away by the sweet emotion of this piece that I am unable
to express my appreciation appropriately.
This is beyond review, it is spectacular writing.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful work of art.
Brilliant !
My favorite.
My rating is 100 %
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I have read some dedicated people, but never have I
read, heard, seen such devotion in writing.
This is perhaps a requirment when writing of love, just
quote nearly any part of your poem and the writer will
have defined loyalty.
Normally my reviews get a little wordy, but I am so carried
away by the sweet emotion of this piece that I am unable
to express my appreciation appropriately.
This is beyond review, it is spectacular writing.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful work of art.
Brilliant !
My favorite.
My rating is 100 %
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Julie Dant
Julie Dant

Washington, IN



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I've lived in Southern Indiana almost all of my life. I've written poems most of that time, but I am just beginning to share some. I don't think I am great.. I may not even be good, but it is one out.. more..

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