ACROSS ORION FLOW

Soul mates

Across Orion Flow

 

So....when I need you......

What am I supposed to do?

Must I reach across Orion?

Must I hurdle the moon?

 

So....across the universe...

You hear my primal scream?

Feel the pulsation of my energy?

You feel me in your dreams?

 

So....when you need me....

You believe that I will know?

That twin souls share one mind?

Sailing deep in cerebral flow?

 

So....to touch would be The Gift..

Would I recognize your hands?

If you reached across Orion?

And scrawled on the moon our plans?

 

So....I'll find you once again

To hell and back I'll go

Then carve our souls into the sky

'Till we Across Orion Flow....

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Thank you for this because it defines poetry.
This will be cut and pasted to my page so that
anyone who asks, "what is poetry?" they can just
be referred to this, your poem.
You had posed the question in your bio, "maybe I
am not even good." Let me make a correction-----
You are incredible and in each thing you write, your
ability increases exponentially.
Thank you, for poem is an event.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[PureSyn]

Such a beautiful flow of poetry. You heart unleashes in a most exquisite way..and I so love it. These are words that do indeed fall softly upon the heart and soul...of soul-mates! Excellent piece!

Nicole

[Rodwonder]

Great flow, awesome rythm and rhyme.... Make me want to travel in space! Ah! The things we would do for love...

[Brian K. Walters]

This is very creative and well contructed. I loved your ability to combine your imagination with the tenderness of your heart :)

Brian

[Michael]

Yeah, this is nice. Can relate, has me think of my relationship with my best friend Towanda, love being best friends with her, don't get me wrong but i'll always wish it could have gone further too. Love her either way :)