Let it Snow

~~~

As stars that shine on winter nights

are to the moon's beauty

when snowflakes whisper in the wind

so was his love to me

 

And still he shines deep in my heart

and whispers in the glow

of winter nights and pale moons

Please love…let it snow 

Reviews

[Amy R]

A very beautiful poem that shines of love and affection.
The choice of winter imagery suggests a great sense of calm and reflection.
Snowflakes are described as whispering in the wind, giving them a gentle and soft quality that enhances your poem's romantic tone.
Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece.
-Amy

[Trace]

Let it snow indeed, love the whispers of snowflakes.
This poem reminds me .....
Of...... um...
Me.

Very nice, love your poetry ❤️

Huggs, T.

[Marie]

Your words drift slowly down the page as snowflakes drift from the sky above, in this very beautifully penned poem which speaks to me of past love. Beautiful winter depiction! Thank you for sharing, Julie...

[redzone]

a deep love and a longing are heard in those snow whispers. What a wonderful way to express his gentle touch on your heart making it "glow".
-Curt

[Re-Pete]

there's something passionate and emotive about snow - clean, delicate, gentle, beautiful. yes, 'let it snow'. nice job, just don't ask me to shovel it. happy holidays.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Beautiful write----a peaceful snowfall of words.
j.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob. :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... I find your Romantic Poem to be Irresistibly Charming...
when the Moon seduces Lovers... get under the Covers and find the Secrets of
being WARM AS A HOT TODDIE ... Secretly, Pat

[MsJewel]

Your comments always leave me with a smile Pat :) Julie