Let it Snow

art compliments of pinterest

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As stars that shine on winter nights

are to the moon's beauty

when snowflakes whisper in the wind

so was his love to me

 

And still he shines deep in my heart

and whispers in the glow

of winter nights and pale moons

 

Please love…let it snow  

~~~

Author's Note

art - compliments of Pinterest
poetry - MsJewel

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was beautiful. A great many folks on the east coast got more snow than they bargained for these last few days, I was in the lower elevations and there was a torrential rain storm followed by forty mile an hour winds and lightning. It was quite the experience. At least there were no tornadoes here. I enjoyed the read. F.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. No snow here in southern california, but that's what our imaginations are for :) Julie

[Dara]

Your words flow so gently, like snowflakes floating in the air. In just a few lines so beautifully sculpted, one can sense the emotion behind them and the deep feelings that still linger. A perfect write to read on this New Year's morning, Julie. I hope your New Year is filled with much love and happy moments.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Dara. Thanks for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Tate Morgan]

Isnt it funny how the site of snow the smell of cookies baking remind us of moments in the past that we felt most alive.

[MsJewel]

It is funny how that works. thanks so much for stopping by :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

Snow and romance make a good team with a log fire going. Also snow has that gentleness about it just like love. Nice write Julie.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Andrew.

[boygene borice]

Love is the beauty of the soul. Once embraced, its hard to let go. I love this kind of poetry :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Pete]

there is magic and love in snow and you've captured it so well with your words. love every word and especially the ending which leaves a lasting impression just like snow and love ... :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pete :) Julie

[Najam Us Saher]

Passionate words. I could feel like it was snowing when I read your words.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Najam Us Saher]

It was my pleasure reading this :)

[Jon Roggie]

Delicate touch used with the words
Nicely done!

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Jon :) Julie

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful lines of love you have created here Julie with some wonderful winter imagery. A real sense of loss comes across to this reader. Wishing you and yours all the best.

Chris

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Happy New Year :) Julie

[Chris Shaw]

And to you too :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie.... when snowflakes whisper in the moon's glow...
you shine the brightest, and your lover knows... you will find him
beneath a quilt of softly falling snow. May blue birds circle the
place you call home... with wishes for the best New Year ever.
truly, Pat

[MsJewel]

Your comments always leave me with a smile Pat. Happy Holidays my dear friend :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... we need your poems ever so much. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Let it melt in the heart of your readers to enjoy top notch romance and warm feelings. Glad to see you back. Best wishes for the Holidays.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami. It's always lovely to see you :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.