Let it Snow

art compliments of pinterest

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As stars that shine on winter nights

are to the moon's beauty

when snowflakes whisper in the wind

so was his love to me

 

And still he shines deep in my heart

and whispers in the glow

of winter nights and pale moons

 

Please love…let it snow  

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Author's Note

art - compliments of Pinterest
poetry - MsJewel

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was beautiful. A great many folks on the east coast got more snow than they bargained for these last few days, I was in the lower elevations and there was a torrential rain storm followed by forty mile an hour winds and lightning. It was quite the experience. At least there were no tornadoes here. I enjoyed the read. F.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. No snow here in southern california, but that's what our imaginations are for :) Julie

[john l smith]

Very nicely done
In the less romantic world of snow, I would like to see a dump or two myself for the sake of our well in the summer.
Stay warm
Dave B

[MsJewel]

Thank you John :) Julie

[emmajoy]

Such a gentle, loving poem, edged in lace and sweet desire. Beautiful, Julie, truly beautiful in every way.. the colour injected into the whole is cleverly alluring.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you Emma :) Julie

[An owl on the moon]

Sighing... such a soft trembling echo of words and longings. Everything here seems so deeply personal, so transparent. Beautifully confessed.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your generous review :) Julie

[Richard🖌]

Julie Dear,
First-off, your presentation is sheer eye candy … the picture setting a nuance the ambiance of your words answer tenderly ⁓ with warming love, as only You know how.
You know me, a fan of excellently rendered poetic form, rhythm, and emotional metaphor; the Quatrain in bd, fh rhymes amongst my favorites.
I love the way you've used the ellipsis in your final line to emphasize the ending's impact, and the tilde's above and below the body, along with the light blue font choice, to soften the entire feel.

Bless you for sharing your always splendid art, straight from your poetess' ever-so beautiful heart! ⁓ Richard : )

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Richard. :) Julie

[Richard🖌]

You know I'm always thrilled by your poetry, Julie. : D

[Lyn Anderson]

A charming and romantic piece. Impeccably presented, as always. Nice to see you

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lyn :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

You are a nice little breath of fresh air whatever the season

[BlackPrince]

This is a short and sweet poem that speaks volumes on love celebrated.

WELL DONE

[MsJewel]

thank you :) Julie

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

So soft and gentle with beauty incompared is the true love that falls upon the heart- so delicate and free is it but many cannot see and alas love awaits to be found - maybe with snow it shsll be found..,just beautiful🌹

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words :) Julie

[sinNsincerity]

Let it snow indeed Julie. Always elegant.

[MsJewel]

I appreciate your visit and your kind words. Thank you :) Julie

[Trace]

You probably don't get as much snow there as I do. We had a white Christmas and new year and more this Sunday. There is something about snow on a cold winter night that brings out the desire to build a fire and snuggle with someone warm.
Have you ever heard the snow flakes falling? It's like angels whispering.
I love your poem. It makes me want to hear the snow.
Huggs,. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

You still have that special knack for romantic poetry! Gentle and soft...lacy words. So very lovely. Nice to read you again. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you lydi :) Julie