Found

~ a love poem ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

~~~

Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

~~~

Reviews

[Alessander]

This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[B-poet]

It's certainly true that beauty does lie in the eye of the beholder. You've certainly proved that in your poem here. The visualization of a self reflected beauty in the eyes of your life partner is what you've also illustrated with the picture above your sentimental poem. Great work Julie. A passionately profound write. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. :) Julie

[Gee]

Beautiful.......................................

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Nipplegrinder]

Yeah. This one really works. Well crafted.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[MOON]

Beautifully romantic and wonderfully expressed , the joy of love.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

I could help but think of my husband while reading this. Enjoyed, as always.

~Luna

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Luna. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Falcon1]

You hit a cord with my heart strings here it could have verses to a song a very romantic song.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Deeply moving words...so very romantic and filled with intense love. Just so lovely, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[Davidgeo]

Have you ever watched a show called "westworld"? Not the old Michael Crighton one, the new one with Anthony Hopkins and Rachel Evan Wood

[MsJewel]

I've never watched Westworld.

[Davidgeo]

It's a little rough but I think you'd enjoy it. Give it a shot.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Romantic prose characterising the expression of your passionate love. Very nicely conveyed with elegance and quality.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your generous words :) julie

[Abraham George]

nice to read this small romantic bomb, and explode with it.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie