Found

~ a love poem ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

~~~

Reviews

[Alessander]

This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Ardra]

Drifting gently to the sound
of his heartbeat….

I am found

wow... its smooth as the silk itself... :)
loved it..

[DANGER]

AWWW MAN,.. AWW. THAT'S THE S**T! PRETTY. LOL. CUTE AS F**K! LOL.. OH!! KEEP USING WORDS LIKE THAT!! I WANNA SEE, I WANNA SEE=

[ROXANE DORSEY]

I love your poem thank you for sharing. this is nicet

[Sami Khalil]

"Rivers flow, oceans rise
behind the stars in his eyes
I’ve counted each one you see"

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Such a beautiful way to say --I found love here!

[Harley Quinn]

Very beautifully described and written.

[MAC]

a soft and heartfelt write, julie. your love poems are so consistent and yet very uniquely written. always a sincere pleasure to read you dear friend.

[barleygirl]

Simple & heartfelt & gently-expressed with good imagery. Love your rhyming & word choices that help a reader actually FEEL what you're describing!

[apennylate]

I... I am found, gently drifting, gently soaking up the reverie of each lashed kiss... A flowing like rivers go, and on the ocean I know the moon will glow... Gorgeously penned...