The Last Love Poem

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain

Reviews

[UN]

I really enjoy this poem, I love the hyperbole of the last love poem, I love the importance it gives itself to say that the object of the speakers affection would be it, the absolute last. You have a lovely way with words, and I like your word placement. Well done!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Trace]

Beautiful and sincere.
We dream of everlasting love and hope to enjoy it forever... yet we never know when it might go away.
So we make the best and know with each storm a rainbow is promised.
Write each poem in dedication to who and what you love as though it may be your last...... and pray for rain.

Huggs... TRACE.

[onceloved]

I love the different moods you always show in your poetry you have a beautiful ways expressing them even when it hurt so much to do so it reach out to you and pull you in. :) Larry

[onceloved]

You are more than welcome Julie :) Larry

[Enchanted-Raven]

Gorgeous read, beautifully done dear :) x

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love to construe the element of rain within a poem. It's always been such a comfort to me, as far back as I can remember. This reads hauntingly as well as beautifully, Julie, for we shall never know which poem will be our last!

[Tony Jordan]

Behold! A poem that speaks to the soul and will reverberate for a long time to come in the mind and heart too. Excellent Julie!

[Ruth]

Both holding a magical place indeed, this is so beautiful...so intensely romantic and very wonderfully poised, stunning...

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh.....no, it will never be the last love poem. There will always be more written even if about the same lost love. Beautifully written. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Intensely romantic and touching from the deep wells of romance. A culmination of all that is felt and lived...:)................

[Re-Pete]

hmm. doesn't get much deeper than this. these words strike the chords of love, beauty, and passion with a gentle caress in the most delicate and effective manner. makes me take a deep breath and sigh hypnotically. pic adds.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A highly romantic piece Julie. Soft and full of old fashioned passionate intimacy.