The Last Love Poem

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 The Last Love Poem

 

If this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you, my love

and the rain…

 

falling softly on the roses

 

I fell too

for your eyes,

 pools of liquid moonlight

and your kisses,

whispering of rainbows forevermore

 

Yes, if this were the last love poem ever written

it would be for you…

 

and the rain

Reviews

[UN]

I really enjoy this poem, I love the hyperbole of the last love poem, I love the importance it gives itself to say that the object of the speakers affection would be it, the absolute last. You have a lovely way with words, and I like your word placement. Well done!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... the rain falling softly on the roses... the smooth feel of love when kisses like rain seal the fragrance of passion. Once loved in a garden will linger forever. truly, Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Ghost]

I so hope that love poems never stop, you have a beautiful poem. I hope I can keep writing love poems just as wonderful as this...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Ghost]

You are welcome. I will read more soon

[BlackPrince]

This poem is romantic with a sweet suspense that leaves the reader hanging and wondering.

WELL DONE

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Love how nice to feel and be in . thanks for this poem.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I'm sure it can't be the last--however, it is well done!

[Poeticme]

Ahh!!,...your style my lady, so elegant and soft. Enjoyed reading this lovely piece. But this cannot be the last love poem, for I write them all the time☺️. Hope you are doing well, I sent you a read request some time ago, I'm sure you're a busy lady, but as you have time I would appreciate it. I always like your feedback,..take care and thank you for sharing.

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...the very last love poem ... for "you" the love and for the "rain" for hiding sad tears fro something that will be no more ..i love this a lot Ms J ...i think the theme and use of language is divine
E.

[Ken Simm.]

So many songs that this reminds me of but it holds its own with all.

[APOORVA]

such classy writing dear friend.
I've got a lot to learn from you...