A Storm Untamed

 

~~~

These zephyr winds that wait for thunder

that rumble deep where passion lives

in storms that cannot yield as under

the silk of sheets, these winds they give

you every breath and every heartbeat

quickly to rise, surrounding you

with an embrace both wild and sweet… 

you cannot tame what these winds do

 

Gather these winds with the passion of

a storm untamed, for you my love

~~~

                     

                                                       

Author's Note

Art ~ Arthur Braginsky
Poetry ~ MsJewel

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. in storms that cannot yield as under ~ the silk of sheets.. .. ' Those zephyr winds have much to answer to! Some would ask for more of that sweet two-worded phrase!

As to your chosen illustration, it leads the way, es complimenting the passion of your words, each and every one.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie

[Enchanted-Raven]

Gorgeous read....enjoyed :) x

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Tabby Mac]

You have such a way with words! I love how you slow love down and make it a special treat. Like getting a 10$ speciality cupcake at the bakery. You never dive right in...you take its wrapper off and savor every last bite. You poems do the same. I admire how in every piece you are able to use images of storms and such to paint a picture so eloquently classy and sexy...it's a true gift! Love it!!
Well penned as always!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Now I want a cupcake! :) Julie

[Relic]

Whenever I want to read a sultry poem that's as soft a favorite pillow, I come to you.

Always breathless and enjoyable.

:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[richieb]

Your words flow into sensual curves that wrap themselves around the readers thoughts give their passions reason to stir.
Thunder, rumble,silk sheets and passion. The anticipation is always the mind bender. Enjoyed your poem.
Blessings,
Richie b.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Richie. Thanks so much :) Julie

[apennylate]

Fantastic, like a zephyr, I gather the gentle sweeps of this poems rhythm into a bundle of storm clouds for love... Beautiful write... Silkily penned...

[MsJewel]

"silkily" I love that word! Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Paul Bell]

The picture like the poem is full of passion.
As it should be. For true passion should be stormy.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Paul :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I loved the structure of how you presented this. There really is no taming of the winds of passion ;) :)

Superb piece.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[Kelly Scheppers]

You've certainly given a whole new meaning to the adage of being blown away, Julie. What a beautiful poem!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Kelly :) Julie

[Ana B.]

This is otherworldly. Simply stunning in all aspects dear Julie. Your writing always makes me smile and bask in tenderness for a few moments.

[MsJewel]

..and you have a beautiful smile my friend! :) Julie

[Trace]

A passionate and intimate love can feel as temultious as a violent thunderstorm
And you have an amazing way of spelling it out in your poetry.

Damn I love this stuff.

Huggs. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you handsome. Hugs, J