A Storm Untamed

 

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These zephyr winds that wait for thunder

that rumble deep where passion lives

in storms that cannot yield as under

the silk of sheets, these winds they give

you every breath and every heartbeat

quickly to rise, surrounding you

with an embrace both wild and sweet… 

you cannot tame what these winds do

 

Gather these winds with the passion of

a storm untamed, for you my love

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Author's Note

Art ~ Arthur Braginsky
Poetry ~ MsJewel

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. in storms that cannot yield as under ~ the silk of sheets.. .. ' Those zephyr winds have much to answer to! Some would ask for more of that sweet two-worded phrase!

As to your chosen illustration, it leads the way, es complimenting the passion of your words, each and every one.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear jewel ... the passion that links
sapphires and smoky topaz moments when
thunder rolls and lightening strikes the
heart and soul of untamed love... wild and free...
Amen

[ROXANE DORSEY]

thanks for this nice poem and art

[onceloved]

You expressed your sensual desires so beautifully when lust is formed in the heart and soul there is a fine line between love and lust you found what it is Julie. :) Larry Sorry I miss one

[MCS]

Heart racing read...wonderful as always

[Sami Khalil]

Compellingly romantic in all aspects. Breathtakingly enchanting to every lover out there. Glad to have visited...:)..............

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, Julie....::::))))

[Lydia Shutter]

Seductive and sensual...your words are written so well, Julie. The rhythm and rhyme of this form is delightful. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi. I appreciate you :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

haha Passion, lust is always the storm before the calm, one just has to watch the clouds gather!!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Andrew :) Julie

[Ken Simm.]

Romance raised to the nth power.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ken :) Julie

[barleygirl]

I love the way you tangle up elements of nature with hints of sensuality. As always, well-written with a creative flow of imagery. I always forget to mention this, but you select awesome art, which I very much enjoy too.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I love art as well and Arthur Braginsky is one of my favorites :) Julie

[Nipplegrinder]

This is sensuously graceful. I very much enjoyed this piece.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie