The Artist

~ a romantic octelle ~

Karol Bak ~ Art

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A masterpiece before his eyes

he paints her as he would sunrise

catching light shining within

in golden hues, silken skin

is softer still, with a trace

whispering of clouds of lace

a masterpiece before his eyes

he paints her as he would sunrise

 

With warmth and grace, his work of art

wraps bright sunbeams around his heart

soft yet bold with just a blush

of gentle fire from his brush

rising in his sky of blue

in her beauty all is new

with warmth and grace, his work of art

wraps bright sunbeams around his heart

 

And in the chill of darkened skies

he looks to her, she is sunrise

painting dreams in colors of

his passion,  as from above

she fills shadows of the night

fading gently in her light

and in the chill of darkened skies

he looks to her, she is sunrise….

~~~

Reviews

[J Manuel]

Your three Octave stanza’s contains such established pattern and organization with wonderful rhyme schemes at the end of each verse. The artist and masterful feminine beauty creation, what a perfect theme, enjoyed this piece thanks for sharing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[LKBillips]

Painted beautifully with words. ;). A romantic view on artwork. Lovely.

[Poeticme]

"Wraps bright sunbeams around his heart"

What a beautiful line ma'am!!, In jealous!!...Very wonderfully​ written, thanks for sharing this delightful piece

Poeticme

[Isabella Ivy]

Simply an exquisite piece of writing, so romantic and rich (as in, enriched), packed full of artistic charm. Thank you for sharing! I.I.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Isabella Ivy]

You are most welcome!

[AYVID N]

And in the chill of darkened skies
he looks to her, she is sunrise
painting dreams in colors of
his passion, as from above
she fills shadows of the night
fading gently in her light
and in the chill of darkened skies
he looks to her, she is sunrise….

Breathtakingly beautiful poetry. It's such a pleasure just to look at it, then read it again and again...and then again.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for the lovely comment. You have left me with a smile today! :) Julie

[AYVID N]

You are welcome. :)

[Trace]

Whether painting canvas with a brush
Or paper with a quill
There are many variations to the definition of Artist.

You paint such a beautiful picture with your words
That the person reading can visually see what you felt as you wrote.

Stunningly beautiful painting.

Huggs. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your opinion means the world to me. Hugs, J

[Sami Khalil]

No one can get enough of wonderful poetry and images like this. Just sit back and savor beauty and wonder...:)..............

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your generous words Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...::::)))

[Drcicarlo]

Very delicate, beautiful writing. You quite literally and figuratively paint a lovely picture. It reminds me of a dream of going to Spain and finding my own artistic Casanova.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Erica :) Julie

[Ken Simm.]

Now of course I would like this, given my job.
Wonder why it never happened to me when I was life drawing?
Still I don't need the reality when I have such a perfect romance to savour.
Sensual without being overt and passionate without tacky. Simply lovely.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Ken - very much appreciated :) Julie

[onceloved]

Back again to say you are true artist by the way you always pain your poetry so beautifully your poems/picture always seem to compliment one another so beautifully. I love the image you use in this one....CS time again.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie