Love

~ a little romantic scribble ~

                                   art ~ Charmaine Olivia

 Love…

 

To lay my head a moment ‘pon his chest

a serenade of two hearts intertwined

that takes us far above the restless night

where only heaven waits, we move as one

I’ll count the stars reflection in his eyes

and  know each wish was only that for love

 

Each breath between us sweet

oh precious one…

                                hold me close as midnight sheds her dew      

 

To wake to pale white lilies standing tall

and buds upon the vine glistening dawn

to catch each falling tear, this pearly morn

as soft as silk yet warm, as he is near

then join him half-awake veiled in our dream

where wishes still shine true in loving eyes…

Author's Note

art ~ Charmaine Olivia
poetry ~ MsJewel

Reviews

[richieb]

Julie,
I don't know where to begin. If I say this is the most beautiful poem of love between a man and a woman, I would not be exagerating.
You have a gift young lady. Your writing inspires a bountiful garden of full flowers with soft colors and petals. I truly am in awe of your writing.
Peace,
Richie b.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kindness and for supporting my poetry. I'm thrilled you enjoy it. :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Dreamy romance in every line. Julie, thrilled to see your words again. " hold me close as midnight sheds her dew" only you can write romance like this. Wonderful work. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Lydi. I hope all is well. Hugs, Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

so romantic and vivid description of love.........
loved it!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thanks a bunch! :) Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very romantic and very Shakespearian Ms Jewell!

[MsJewel]

Thank you John :) Julie

[Ruth]

Such a softness coils here, a warmth and gentle visual, beautiful...

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Poppy. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Ananya]

Beautiful. Very nice flow in your poem. It is very melodious even though it is not rhymed. Wonderfully romantic.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You always capture the romantic in me with your poetry. Please lock me up and throw away the key.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet Cowboy :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

"wishes shine & love alive in lovin eyes"... that's sorta systematic "choreography" you planting or may be, so-called "sampling" in your "ruby" words. deep. valuable. lushy. romantic & certainly, a marvelous write it is. real warmed but so gentle touchè of feelings always fascinate hearts in the interest of love, & you've highlighten everything related to it here around... in 'tis lubricate poetry very sharply. great work.

ps. choice of coloring words with "pink" is a real movement. absolute "love" & the WORK of lips you polishing well here... in imagery. brilliant!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Each breath between us sweet
oh precious one…
hold me close as midnight sheds her dew

Lovely and melodies flow.....

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my little scribble :) Julie

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I really did :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Your romantic writes are so beautiful, and well presented -- a touching, sad, emotional poem.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much! :) Julie

[Inject Positivity]

Greatly presented!!!

The innocence of love and the beauty of nature that guides the two loving hearts presenting the poem in a memorable way... So beautiful to read... The imageries in the poem compliments the sweet moment of love between the poet and her lover... There is peaceful and romantic feel in the poem that makes the reader feel the awe in his own heart... Lovely...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous words :) Julie