~ If ~

~ just a little scribble ~

art by Lauri Blank

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If dreams come true, my precious one

lonely nights would never be

For I would let my hair flow

in an ocean of beauty

I’d catch you with each golden strand

and hold you close to me

We’d sail away upon sweet dreams

in colors of the sea...

Reflections of an endless love

for all eternity

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Author's Note

art by Lauri Blank
poetry by MsJewel

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

your poetry clearly proving, why ladies love getting blushed & well sailed in the yacth of tender dreams. quite captivating & caramelized flavor of words you biographed here around in your poetry. it's, you know, always ecstatic to read your eccentrically modernized, & certainly so-called mobilized work (with &, of course, in "Romania" touch). brilliant!

[A Spell of Inspiration]

Lovely poem! I enjoyed reading every single line! Keep on shining!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh you siren you! :) love your stuff Ms. Jewel .. no exception with this one .. although those fish do not look very inviting to me :}
E.

[onceloved]

Loved the way you turn your fantasy visions into very beautiful poetry, you are a very romantic person showing how much love mean to you and why take care my friend. :) hugs Larry

[Trace]

The simplest of line and verse
often are the most powerful of poems
When love is the emotion expressed.

Beautifully written my friend.

Huggs... TRACE

[SJ Mullins]

This is a lovely romantic write. I enjoyed it immensely.

[Relic]

This is a wonderfully written fantasy/wish that displays in words the true desire inside you. Had imagination not been given to all humans we would not have the opportunity to enjoy such heart-warming writings such as this.

It's always good to visit and view your imagination Jewel.

[Davidgeo]

It reads like silk, or perhaps warm butter.

There is no reasonable critique for me to give to you here.

You're a natural, but you knew that.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Wow! Wonderful. Short and very deep meaning. It reminds me of those carpe diem poems of the old days. But this one I think is defferent. Well done.

[Echoes of Eros]

Reading and sighing in the beauty and longing that you have flowing through you. And how I ache to see such sweet dreams awakening from all these shadowed thoughts that have lingered all too long. Your words give me hope that maybe dream can become alive. xo