~ If ~

~ just a little scribble ~

art by Lauri Blank

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If dreams come true, my precious one

lonely nights would never be

For I would let my hair flow

in an ocean of beauty

I’d catch you with each golden strand

and hold you close to me

We’d sail away upon sweet dreams

in colors of the sea...

Reflections of an endless love

for all eternity

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Author's Note

art by Lauri Blank
poetry by MsJewel

Reviews

[Poeticme]

The passion you convey in your poetry makes me smile, for j write the same way, I am a very passionate writer. What a beautiful poem ma'am, melted my heart with every line, by the time I was finished it was reduced to a puddle of passion 😉..Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece

Poeticme

[richieb]

Your poems are always passionate and blissful. This poem was not as intense as others I have read of yours. None the less it is well written and speaks to lovers. Your work is always polished.
Richie b.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Richie :) Julie

[Abraham George]

I will pray that your Dreams will come true

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you.

[Abraham George]

its ok. If you have time please go through my works too.

[Giulia King]

Beautifully written! :) love the picture as well.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"If dreams come true, my precious one
lonely nights would never be
For I would let my hair flow
in an ocean of beauty"

This is beautifully written. A soft piece with quite an imagery but a longing too..
Nicely penned 😊

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[Valentine]

Not so little a scribble. A whole lot said in just a few words. Nice write. Valentine

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Julie, what a soft and vivid piece of artistry :) Beautiful!

[WordKnurd]

I really enjoyed this. The imagery was surreal, yet strangely comforting and the language itself was lilting, beautiful, and befitting of the topic. My only issue might be the title, since it is already the title of a very famous poem. I half expected it to be related in some way to Kipling's "If" when I saw it. Other than that, this is lovely. Keep up the good work, and please review one of mine if you get the chance.

[SmittyJas]

love is an all eternity kind of stuff always should be. Love is forevermore.

[Nisreen]

A truly poetic piece
dreams are the true window of the soul

and what a wonderful place for a lover to reside ......