The Sweetest Sound
A Poem by
MsJewel
~ a naughty but nice little love scribble ~
photograph compliments of pinterest
In the soft
in the warm
truth and secrets lay exposed
and nothing dwells but love...
composed from the windfall
of two hearts beating
with the thrill of me
under you
we revel
in the sweet
Nirvana in my eyes
you…
tangled in my thighs
passion dripping blissful love
a naked sigh upon your lips…
the sweetest sound
in the soft
in the warm
© 2016 MsJewel
Featured Review
My favorite poetry is that which makes me smile,
And when I read your soft and sensual lines,
I can't help but feel those words working their magic on me.
It is always so good to read your wonderful poetry and to talk to you,
I have missed both terribly.
This is not just soft and warm,, it is dripping with passion and extremely HOT.
and I love it.
Thanks for sharing tonight.
BIG HUGGS,, Trace
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
xoxoxoxoxox
Julie
Reviews
dear Julie, finding a pearl in a clam is
exciting as is your poetry... sensual and
desirable. truly, Pat
Posted 8 Years Ago
dear Julie, finding a pearl in a clam is
exciting as is your poetry... sensual and
desirable. truly, Pat
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I love pearls...Hugs, Julie
I enjoyed reading this piece...
Sensually romantic thanks for sharing friend.... *Smiles*
Posted 8 Years Ago
I enjoyed reading this piece...
Sensually romantic thanks for sharing friend.... *Smiles*
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you for the kind words :) Julie
8 Years Ago
My pleasure *Smiles*
My favorite poetry is that which makes me smile,
And when I read your soft and sensual lines,
I can't help but feel those words working their magic on me.
It is always so good to read your wonderful poetry and to talk to you,
I have missed both terribly.
This is not just soft and warm,, it is dripping with passion and extremely HOT.
and I love it.
Thanks for sharing tonight.
BIG HUGGS,, Trace
Posted 8 Years Ago
My favorite poetry is that which makes me smile,
And when I read your soft and sensual lines,
I can't help but feel those words working their magic on me.
It is always so good to read your wonderful poetry and to talk to you,
I have missed both terribly.
This is not just soft and warm,, it is dripping with passion and extremely HOT.
and I love it.
Thanks for sharing tonight.
BIG HUGGS,, Trace
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
xoxoxoxoxox
Julie
Passion and Love go hand in hand with your poem here. Great work. A solid visualization of true ecstasy.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Passion and Love go hand in hand with your poem here. Great work. A solid visualization of true ecstasy.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Very sensual leaves a lot to imagination, I love it especially the last paragraph. :) Larry
Posted 8 Years Ago
Very sensual leaves a lot to imagination, I love it especially the last paragraph. :) Larry
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Larry. Thanks so much :) Julie
8 Years Ago
I love sharing your poetry with you Julie, for the last seven years. :) Larry
yes, quite sensual in an "under the covers kind of way"---
j.
Posted 8 Years Ago
yes, quite sensual in an "under the covers kind of way"---
j.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you Jacob. It's lovely to see you! :) Julie
8 Years Ago
likewise, Julie, and good to read you again.
j.
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MsJewel The Beach, CA
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I've been writing poetry for 25 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
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