Just As You Left Me

~ a romantic scribble ~

It is just as you left it…

                      this shore on which I wait

         

 

watching the ocean, in colors of your eyes,

                 rising

                             as my whole heart rises

                                       blue as my reflection

               though waves of passion still find me in red

                 blushing…

           naked to your breath

surrounded only by the echo of the wind,

stirring the storm that whispers of clouds,

                        some colored with hope

 

wishing…dreaming

                              you will uncover me

among the seashells and treasures lost

but found again

                                        just as you left me…

 

                                     watching the ocean, in colors of your eyes

Author's Note

photography ~ Stan Trampe

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful place and journey in your words.
"though waves of passion still find me in red
blushing…
naked to your breath"
I love the above lines. I could write a epic poem from these words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry dear Julie.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thanks so much! :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure to read our work dear Julie.

[onceloved]

;) I have miss the heart and soul of you Julie, it always show up in your beautifully written poetry, like Trace said it' so good to see you back here writing again :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are more than welcome Julie. GO Dodgers :)Larry

[Trace]

Your poetry has been missed so much.
What a beautifully sentimental poem.
Full of love and longing.

It is so good to see you writing again.

HUGGS. .. Trace

[MsJewel]

I never stopped writing - just stopped posting - a break well needed. I did miss you terribly though Hugs, Julie

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful pic and poem. So romantic with a tinge of sadness. When leaving becomes a reality, we whisper to the clouds hearing the echoes and look for the stars hoping for the return...Excellent...:)........

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Any time...:)...................

[B. Boileau]

Strong romatic passionate words. you paint a beautiful picture.

Well done !

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOWZA... it feels so good to be reading your romantic poetry again... and that hint of sensuality you added to it like a spice to dinner makes me want seconds and thirds.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure darling Julie :)