Just As You Left Me

~ a romantic scribble ~

It is just as you left it…

                      this shore on which I wait

         

 

watching the ocean, in colors of your eyes,

                 rising

                             as my whole heart rises

                                       blue as my reflection

               though waves of passion still find me in red

                 blushing…

           naked to your breath

surrounded only by the echo of the wind,

stirring the storm that whispers of clouds,

                        some colored with hope

 

wishing…dreaming

                              you will uncover me

among the seashells and treasures lost

but found again

                                        just as you left me…

 

                                     watching the ocean, in colors of your eyes

Author's Note

photography ~ Stan Trampe

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful place and journey in your words.
"though waves of passion still find me in red
blushing…
naked to your breath"
I love the above lines. I could write a epic poem from these words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry dear Julie.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thanks so much! :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure to read our work dear Julie.

[Daydreamer]

SOOOOO LONNGGGG BACKKKKK........
OH, GOD! WELCOMEEE MRS. JEWEL 😍😍😍❤❤❤❤💉💉💉💉

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend! It's great to be back :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

Totally miss your lovely feed ❤❤❤

[Sudeep Mishra]

Very nicely penned.
Loved the comparison, Outstanding imagination and beautiful portrayal.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

don't know if it is just the day............but something about that opening line brought tears to my eyes..........
very beautiful..........
I always love your poems......
:)

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled it touched you - thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Mercy Fae]

The words flow flawlessly. Amazing!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Saddam]

wishing…dreaming
you will uncover me
among the seashells and treasures lost
but found again
just as you left me…

Beautiful as the seashore.... Up and down of heart's passion.
Great as always.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Again another beautiful piece of work!
Waiting to be found like a lost treasure,
very creative and well written!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you James :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

Reminds me the "Jewels" of "Sea-Shells" that belong to furrowed hearts. Love's romance so is romance love, but when it comes to hearts, ah... even the life goes blurred. You certainly speak the heart. Memories of love, love with shades and the "colored" breaths... everything's evocative and is romantically pen'd up... with words, so nicely painted on words. Excellent work. Enjoyed reading your poetry!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Gee]

Beautifully written,pssst,the woman in the pic needs to gorge on doughnuts because if a famine a'happens she sure ain't gonna last long............the echo says,beautifully written Julie

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Gee...
hmmm...doughnuts...that sounds yummy....

[Einstein Noodle]

the wistful longing as her man is out to sea ... i needed one of your "scribbles" this morning ... thanks for posting Ms.
E.
https://youtu.be/N-tRXewCAmU

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

What a beautiful touching write that reaches out and that pic is every-man's dream to die for! A enticing alluring sensual write Julie! Nice as! :)

[MsJewel]

I*'m thrilled you enjoyed it Andrew. Thanks so much :) Julie