Just As You Left Me

~ a romantic scribble ~

It is just as you left it…

                      this shore on which I wait

         

 

watching the ocean, in colors of your eyes,

                 rising

                             as my whole heart rises

                                       blue as my reflection

               though waves of passion still find me in red

                 blushing…

           naked to your breath

surrounded only by the echo of the wind,

stirring the storm that whispers of clouds,

                        some colored with hope

 

wishing…dreaming

                              you will uncover me

among the seashells and treasures lost

but found again

                                        just as you left me…

 

                                     watching the ocean, in colors of your eyes

Author's Note

photography ~ Stan Trampe

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful place and journey in your words.
"though waves of passion still find me in red
blushing…
naked to your breath"
I love the above lines. I could write a epic poem from these words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry dear Julie.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thanks so much! :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure to read our work dear Julie.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

stirring the storm that whispers of clouds,
some colored with hope

beautiful, Julie, as always. I like this poem very much, love the sea, the waves and the beach. Well done. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi :) Julie

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A beautiful piece as always. Such deep feeling in the lines. Great poetry.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for stopping by with such kind words. It is lovely to see you :) Julie

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Sorry been so busy with work and writing not had a deal of time to get on here. Hope to spend more time now things are a little easier. Regards.

[Blue]

Your signature style is the same as how I remember it best--fine, delicate, subtle, beautiful. You are always a delight to read, Ms. Julie.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Blue. It is wonderful to see you! :) Julie

[Philip Muls]

Beginning and ending with the same message as if closing a loop that goes around and round.

Strong imagery..waves, wind, clouds.

Well done.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Philip :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

Reading you is like a dream. Beautiful soft tones that light the way and provide such amazing imagery Julie. So wonderful and always a pleasure to read your work....what a way to start the day.

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. Your comment has made my day. Thank you Troy :) Julie

[cycy]

wow,beautiful poem julie well written indeed.it has such a lovely feel to it, so dreamy and just lifts you away into a different place.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Dianah Njoroge]

damn. some cool romance there. i love it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[B]

I find your work to be so peaceful

True
Its the same
just as he left

i stood there
in his eyes

you really placed my head where i want it to be

beautiful

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Robert]

Julie, Another lovely piece you have written. The photo is perfect for the poem and first lines I especially like, " It is just as you left it…this shore on which I wait".

[MsJewel]

Thank you Robert :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear JUlie, delicate murmurings of missing the treasures
taken by the tide of yesteryear which you hold in the
waves of desire... truly mesmerizing poetry, Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words Pat. Hope all is well. Hugs, Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... all is well... The Autumn is
a pallet of persimmon and lavender as depicted in
my recent poem, Ladies of Autumn.
I trust all is well with you and yours, hugs, Pat