Awakening

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ Karol Bak

It’s you that awakens

 

the stars in my eyes

the moon in my soul

passion…

as if the skies

 

have wrapped me in your love

 

satin sheets of night

my heart surrendered

to your dark and light

 

You awaken me

Reviews

[JayceeC]

"the stars in my eyes//the moon in my soul" I love this description. It wraps your reader in a soft flow of love and happiness. It's a great analogy that sits and swirls in my mind. I'm not sure how you keep that soft romantic voice and tone write after write, but I always know where to find my warm fuzzies.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie

[Trace]

You dont know how much I look forward to reading a new poem from you.
And I always enjoy each and every word in every line.

Your poetry is such a wonderful pleasure.

HUGGS. .. TRACE

[MsJewel]

Your comments always leave me with a smile Trace. Hugs, Julie

[onceloved]

:) A very beautiful poignant piece of your heart on is page lovely prose too. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are welcome Julie. thank you for sharing again. :) Larry

[Gee]

So few words but so much conveyed,a treat to read............as usual

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Gee]

Always a pleasure

[Valentine]

Whew, you left me dreamy eyed with this one. I wish everyone in life to find that special ...you.
Also the real special"YOU" God..

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Kathie. Thanks so much :) Julie