Awakening

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ Karol Bak

It’s you that awakens

 

the stars in my eyes

the moon in my soul

passion…

as if the skies

 

have wrapped me in your love

 

satin sheets of night

my heart surrendered

to your dark and light

 

You awaken me

Reviews

[JayceeC]

"the stars in my eyes//the moon in my soul" I love this description. It wraps your reader in a soft flow of love and happiness. It's a great analogy that sits and swirls in my mind. I'm not sure how you keep that soft romantic voice and tone write after write, but I always know where to find my warm fuzzies.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

But what is this that one can love a soul such as you? You are of tender sweetness Julie!

Regards,
Al

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Great poem, Julie. It's nice to have someone who can make this happen. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

So beautifully written with a flowing romantic endless night of love Julie. And I thank you for your kind words you have expressed on my writes

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Andrew. I enjoyed catching up on your poetry today :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

The queen of romance in all its royalty. So glad I visited today...:).............

[MsJewel]

It'ls always lovely when you visit :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ......:).......

[Mai L Nissen]

As always great flow! I always like reading your stuff :)

[MsJewel]

It's nice to see you Mai. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

you are a master of this! i really mean it girl! i have no trouble at all with reading, pausing, and sometimes STOP! ... it all flows so well ..so kudos for that ... and the intelligence and subtle sensuous passion sizzles just under the level of sight ... true love can not be real without the acceptance of each others dark and light .. i love this poem .. very fine in my opinion .. DON'T STOP! :))
E.

[MsJewel]

Your kind and generous words have made my day. Thank you! :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

no! thank you :))

[dan]

Julie, So short an expression of sentiments that are, in and of themselves, so long on meaning. Exquisitely and divinely written, the bell of romance chimes as brightly as the toll of dawn. Amazing! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Dan :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sighs....you can elicit them more easily than any other poet, my friend! So very romantic. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Lydi. I appreciate you! :) Julie

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the first three lines describe the most intimate form of love and likening that love to the sky wrapping you in satin sheets of night is simply gorgeous...your poetry and accompanying art work always give me reason to pause...stunning work, Julie :)

[MsJewel]

Your reviews are always so encouraging. Thanks so much :) Julie