Awakening

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ Karol Bak

It’s you that awakens

 

the stars in my eyes

the moon in my soul

passion…

as if the skies

 

have wrapped me in your love

 

satin sheets of night

my heart surrendered

to your dark and light

 

You awaken me

Reviews

[JayceeC]

"the stars in my eyes//the moon in my soul" I love this description. It wraps your reader in a soft flow of love and happiness. It's a great analogy that sits and swirls in my mind. I'm not sure how you keep that soft romantic voice and tone write after write, but I always know where to find my warm fuzzies.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

I like like the nice place you took me dear Poet. To be awoke by the gentleness of love touch. No better place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[R Smith]

you certainly awakened me this fine morning, I'd like to quote a line or two as favorite's but the whole thing is immaculate, into my favorites you go Julie......oh! and your poems too you can sit and write all day I'll read every word a hundred times over :)

[Jamestown]

Awesome write as always my oh so talented friend:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cassie]

This is such a good scribble. Loved it

[Ana B.]

As ever, you adorn the sea of written jems dear Julie :)

[AaronFreitas]

There are such beautiful words Julie... I loved it. A write that really draws you in... I felt like I was in love for a second lol :)

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Ultra romantic, Julie. Such a soft tender loving feeling.

[Rinzin Samdup]

beautiful. i was wondering if i'll get a chance to see the stars in my eyes and moon in my soul too....bloody romantic write up :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this person is awfully special to be able to move a poetess to write such wonderful sentiment.

j.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It has been a while since I let out a sigh... but after reading this I let one out that could feel the Grand Canyon.