From the Shore

~ a romantic fantasy ~

Art ~ Karol Bak

 

 

 

From the Shore

 

The moon reigned the night

and the stars were her diamond crown

 

shimmering

 

as slow waves

teased a gentle shore

and the wildflowers on the hill

gracefully swayed

 

The sand was soft under my toes

his breath was a whisper, warm on my cheek

we searched and found where tides had never roamed

where night had never dawned

 

He lifted me up and the crown became my own

 

….and the wildflowers gracefully swayed

~~~

 

Reviews

[Trace]

I don't think you have a bone in your body that isn't romantic.
Everything you write is simply mesmerizing and inspiring.

And you have such a unique way of painting a picture with your words
that makes it easy for the reader to see into your fantasies and imagination.

I like the wildflowers.

Huggs, Trace

[MsJewel]

((((((Trace))))) It's wonderful to see you here. I sure miss you. Thanks for the lovely comment. I hope all is well. Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

I posted a poem I wrote today.
We are having a blue moon tonight.

[Kajal Sharma]

it was so romantic...i love the imagery in the poem....well done..thanks for sharing!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Dara]

This fits perfectly with the blue moon that was hanging overhead. Your words put us right there at the shore watching the wildflowers swaying in the breeze. I love the wonderful images you have created and once again you touch every romantic bone in the body.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Dara. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

An elegant tapestry of romance and nature. Gentle and soft. Your words are enchanting, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

Mesmerising ,scintillating in romance so soft. I think all parts of nature celebrated that day with the wildflowers smiling or swaying! Nice write Julie

[MsJewel]

Thank you Andrew :) Julie

[sinNsincerity]

I must say that I really love your writes that encompass the ocean and beach Julie.
"we searched and found where tides had never roamed," this line was to die for!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Gee]

Beautiful,as usual,you have a gift few seem to possess.....I used to make the mistake of comparing mine to yours but that was depressing,I now just take it that some can,some can't but we all try

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your kind and generous words. Thanks so much :) Julie

[onceloved]

:) I love the beauty of this fantasy you do have a very beautiful ways expressing your poetry so beautifully :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry! :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are more than welcome Julie, I miss your poetry. :) Larry