From the Shore

~ a romantic fantasy ~

Art ~ Karol Bak

 

 

 

From the Shore

 

The moon reigned the night

and the stars were her diamond crown

 

shimmering

 

as slow waves

teased a gentle shore

and the wildflowers on the hill

gracefully swayed

 

The sand was soft under my toes

his breath was a whisper, warm on my cheek

we searched and found where tides had never roamed

where night had never dawned

 

He lifted me up and the crown became my own

 

….and the wildflowers gracefully swayed

~~~

 

Reviews

[Trace]

I don't think you have a bone in your body that isn't romantic.
Everything you write is simply mesmerizing and inspiring.

And you have such a unique way of painting a picture with your words
that makes it easy for the reader to see into your fantasies and imagination.

I like the wildflowers.

Huggs, Trace

[MsJewel]

((((((Trace))))) It's wonderful to see you here. I sure miss you. Thanks for the lovely comment. I hope all is well. Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

I posted a poem I wrote today.
We are having a blue moon tonight.

[Re-Pete]

Very beautiful & romantic. Draws you into the scene. You write with passion & romanticism. Great job.

[A.marie.speaks]

Beautifully written! Absolutely lovely imagery.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Romance in verse as two lovers enjoy a night beach.

[Troy Henson]

Gorgeous Julie:)
Imagery again here was fantastic.

[Arthur Henn]

This is more than a romantic fantasy. This is a tapestry of nature's warmth written from the heart!

[AaronFreitas]

Beautifully romantic :) I want sand under my toes too! haha Great work Julie :)

[mattavelli]

This is lovely. your words flow smoothly with beautiful imagery.
"He lifted me up and the crown became my own"
I really like it!

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for your kind words :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Like always, outstanding, romantic an sensuel, Julie. Well done. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much my dear friend :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

Nice write Julie waiting for more.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful places you took me with dear friend. Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.