In the Mist

~ a romantic scribble ~

      

 

In the Mist….

 

He breathes in the cool night air

a vision as light as the mist

                                sweeping my window

 

Haunting memories etched upon my heart

 

unforgettable…yes…

for I’ve felt the tenderness of his touch, his lips

soft,

                           silky,

                                        wet

                 as the night sheds her dew

                          yet is still

as I search for words as lovely as he

 

He is all things beautiful…perhaps not to another’s eye

but to me…

 

He is the whisper in the silence of a dream

weaving the moonlight

                stirring the stars

                                sparkling silver wishes

                                             falling

                  as soft as a summer rain

 

            Leaving me a bit misty eyed

as he flows through my fingers

                impossible to capture

                      except in the mist

 sweeping my window

 

Author's Note

photography compliments of pinterest

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' He is the whisper in the silence of a dream .. .. .. '

Part glory, part tragedy and both... all. wrapped with tenderness, longing and.. a maybe good bye. The end of your poem is more than most such poems, you're speaking aloud, not from paper or screen.. i feel you're hiding behind every word. This comes across as fact, not.. make believe.. is beautiful.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed a beautifully described scene and sentiment Julie and either she reminisces about a past love or dreams of finding her ideal man. Your terminology is deeply romantic as always.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is really beautiful. Not just lyrically but also the ways you decorated the lines. The words, however, are also very beautiful. I really love your style of writing and your choice of words with beautiful descriptive imagery that is so elegant. And so charming. This person clearly means a lot to you.
Keep up the good work. Stay inspired.

[Trace]

A poem that tenderly describes a love one has for another.
Very pretty.

Huggs. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace :) Julie

[Trace]

You changed your avatar again?
I liked your legs

[Johanna]

so beautiful! haven´t read any of your work before, and I´m very impressed, so good!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Johanna. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie