' He is the whisper in the silence of a dream .. .. .. '
Part glory, part tragedy and both... all. wrapped with tenderness, longing and.. a maybe good bye. The end of your poem is more than most such poems, you're speaking aloud, not from paper or screen.. i feel you're hiding behind every word. This comes across as fact, not.. make believe.. is beautiful.
always sensuous and stimulating your writing just grows and grows, a tale of love that flows like the mist through your fingers, sadness and gentle peace emanate from the page, remarkable writing Julie :)
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm lovely as always ... i like the free style .. it suites you well ;) so she is the night but he .. the one that folds the stars and moon and weather ... and so it is ... it does fall to the man to "do things" to tantalize, delight and favor fair maidens eh!? ;)
i will not trace the cool wet pane again with such callousness .. you poem leaves me feeling ..well ..lovely .. simply lovely:)
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Beautiful and sweet words.
"Leaving me a bit misty eyed
as he flows through my fingers
impossible to capture
except in the mist
sweeping my window"
Good to be misty eyed and content. Thank you Julie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your lovely comment my dear friend :) Julie
Wonderful writing. Love the way it flowed.
It is wonderful to find that one person who is "all things beautiful."
I lost my beautiful Karin to cancer in January.
Thanks for remembering romance.
Julie,
This floats like a whisper, riding on clouds weaving through mist and dream. It's more than the word placement, it's the tone. This reads in a low husky voice, quiet but not quite a whisper. It's the hush of a voice careful not to destroy the moment, when everything is real. Even the landing is slow and soft. Beautiful this dream man.
I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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