In the Mist

In the Mist

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic scribble ~

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In the Mist….

 

He breathes in the cool night air

a vision as light as the mist

                                sweeping my window

 

Haunting memories etched upon my heart

 

unforgettable…yes…

for I’ve felt the tenderness of his touch, his lips

soft,

                           silky,

                                        wet

                 as the night sheds her dew

                          yet is still

as I search for words as lovely as he

 

He is all things beautiful…perhaps not to another’s eye

but to me…

 

He is the whisper in the silence of a dream

weaving the moonlight

                stirring the stars

                                sparkling silver wishes

                                             falling

                  as soft as a summer rain

 

            Leaving me a bit misty eyed

as he flows through my fingers

                impossible to capture

                      except in the mist

 sweeping my window

 

© 2015 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
photography compliments of pinterest

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' He is the whisper in the silence of a dream .. .. .. '

Part glory, part tragedy and both... all. wrapped with tenderness, longing and.. a maybe good bye. The end of your poem is more than most such poems, you're speaking aloud, not from paper or screen.. i feel you're hiding behind every word. This comes across as fact, not.. make believe.. is beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie



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always sensuous and stimulating your writing just grows and grows, a tale of love that flows like the mist through your fingers, sadness and gentle peace emanate from the page, remarkable writing Julie :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very kind Richard. Thank you :) Julie
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm lovely as always ... i like the free style .. it suites you well ;) so she is the night but he .. the one that folds the stars and moon and weather ... and so it is ... it does fall to the man to "do things" to tantalize, delight and favor fair maidens eh!? ;)
i will not trace the cool wet pane again with such callousness .. you poem leaves me feeling ..well ..lovely .. simply lovely:)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

:) .............
Are ther any gorillllars ther in yor mist lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

LOL - I hope not! :) Julie
Beautiful and sweet words.
"Leaving me a bit misty eyed
as he flows through my fingers
impossible to capture
except in the mist
sweeping my window"
Good to be misty eyed and content. Thank you Julie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment my dear friend :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Julie.
Julie: I'm so glad there's a featured review: I'm breathless once again. Your writing is phenomenal. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You are very sweet Dale. Thank you :) Julie
Confuser

9 Years Ago

My pleasure...
Great flow and style, my friend. Just simply loved it....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much :) Julie
wow again...loved it...well done my friend

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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie
Wonderful writing. Love the way it flowed.
It is wonderful to find that one person who is "all things beautiful."
I lost my beautiful Karin to cancer in January.
Thanks for remembering romance.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm so sorry for your loss. Julie
He is the whisper in the silence of a dream
weaving the moonlight
stirring the stars
sparkling silver wishes
falling
as soft as a summer rain


Julie you write so so so beautifully and unique,.I always loved your work...
Romantic, unique and fascinating poem.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment :) Julie
Julie,
This floats like a whisper, riding on clouds weaving through mist and dream. It's more than the word placement, it's the tone. This reads in a low husky voice, quiet but not quite a whisper. It's the hush of a voice careful not to destroy the moment, when everything is real. Even the landing is slow and soft. Beautiful this dream man.

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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment Jaycee :) Julie

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