Like a Poem

~ a collaboration by Trace and MsJewel ~

 What you were looking for, and what you found in me, and what you see, is just the sun at dawn...Reinfried Marass

 

 

                

 

                    She is eternal youth

                rising with the sun…at dawn

                fresh as the morning light...

 

                Innocently floating upon the linen clouds

                towards a destination once unknown

                now captured in the moment of her being

 

                Like a poem

                written in satin scented script

                flowing with the love of whispers on the wind,

                      she is a melody,

                                          not to be held

                            but seized for an instant

                in the shadows of a recollection once forgotten

                           yet, never growing old

 

                She is eternal youth

                                        caught only in a memory

 

Author's Note

photography ~ Reinfried Marass
poetry ~ Trace and MsJewel

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, for me, this is the way we see ourselves. We are still in high school....aren't we? We are still 18 and we are still ready for anything.....unfortunately not true, but the way we see ourselves sometimes. Of course, I have a feeling this could be about your daughter. In any case, this is well written and the imagery is lovely. I liked the change in margins. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[Trace]

I love how this turns out.
Thank you for letting me take your words
And rearrange them
And add my own along with yours to come up with this work.

It has a distinct difference from others
Yet all the uniqueness of our other collaborations.

I so enjoy writing with you my dear friend.

[MsJewel]

I love writing with you too. Thank you sweet beast.
Hugs, Julie

[Cherry Pepperweb]

I have read Trace and I have read Jewel. I definitely love the combo deal. :)
Fab collab you two!

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Cherry :) Julie