Like a Poem

~ a collaboration by Trace and MsJewel ~

 What you were looking for, and what you found in me, and what you see, is just the sun at dawn...Reinfried Marass

 

 

                

 

                    She is eternal youth

                rising with the sun…at dawn

                fresh as the morning light...

 

                Innocently floating upon the linen clouds

                towards a destination once unknown

                now captured in the moment of her being

 

                Like a poem

                written in satin scented script

                flowing with the love of whispers on the wind,

                      she is a melody,

                                          not to be held

                            but seized for an instant

                in the shadows of a recollection once forgotten

                           yet, never growing old

 

                She is eternal youth

                                        caught only in a memory

 

Author's Note

photography ~ Reinfried Marass
poetry ~ Trace and MsJewel

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, for me, this is the way we see ourselves. We are still in high school....aren't we? We are still 18 and we are still ready for anything.....unfortunately not true, but the way we see ourselves sometimes. Of course, I have a feeling this could be about your daughter. In any case, this is well written and the imagery is lovely. I liked the change in margins. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[Belinda Rice]

Wow yet another amazing poem full of grace and shows beauty in your heart and mind. You have a way with words that are magical and full of wonder inspiration of your soul Ty for sharing yet another great piece 💖💯.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

she is a melody,
not to be held
but seized for an instant in the shadows of a recollection once forgotten...

Those words can really soothe a reader with a eager heart. Amazing piece of art!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Julie!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful as always, Julie. Have a good weekend. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi :) Julie

[jeannemarie coulter]

superbly penned...i love it start to finish...thank you...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Confuser]

You guys have written another piece of glorious art. Like a diamond she does shine. Before I got to memory, the visualization was already there...the artwork is beautiful and brought so many things to my mind. It made me remember my younger self; the free spirit, and others I know that are stuck in someone's mind...no pain or regret. Just a part of life. Heartbreak will happen, and somehow over time that picture feels sweeter, lighter; an ethereal feeling in someone's mind. Maybe our own. I wanted to jump in that water! I love it. Please thank Trace! Dale

[MsJewel]

Your lovely comment has made my day. I know Trace will appreciate it as well. :) Julie

[Confuser]

You're welcome....I'm a fan and you two together rock!

[MOON]

Lovely write and collaboration beautifully told.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Moon :) Julie

[sinNsincerity]

I really enjoyed the style and the tittle played out well with the theme. Simply beautiful Julie. Amazing collaboration!

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much. You should check out Trace's writing. He isn't online very often. His poetry is outstanding. :) Julie

[sinNsincerity]

I will surly do so when I get some time away from school. Thank you for the suggestion Julie!

[Relic]

~This is just so damn good. The way the both of you harmonized together on this exudes an admiration for someone we've never met in the flesh. You've created an alluring woman through perfect similes drawn from the characteristics of a picture. I could never do this as good as you both have. Very impressive work that deserves to be noticed. ~

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous words. Trace and I have been writing together for a long time - he is amazing. I know he will appreciate your comment. :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
awesome collab.......
beautiful poem....
i loved it!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweetie! :) Julie