With Love from Venus

~ a romantic sonnet ~

art ~ Venus by Laurie Blank

 

 

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Of an evening star’s sensual delight

passion gently flairs warms the dark of night

Taste the sweet treasure elated lovers share

with a sultry kiss… innocence beware!

 

Let the tender spark radiate a thrill
Can you feel me fall, will you catch me still?

Safely in the arms of beauty we set sail

heartbeats intertwine as moonbeams regale

 

Floating gracefully, softly with the ease

of a whispered breath captured on the breeze

Warmed with the desire scented of the earth
Fly sweet butterflies…true loves precious birth

 

Oh the fantasy once only dreamed of
from my heart to yours, my Adonis love

~~~

 

 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Very captivating poetry you've come up with. Loved the way you turn your fantasy-visions to the analogies of love-words. Short, simple ... clear, concise & very realistic it is! I must say, Choice of words, depth of thoughts & the way you fill the page with musically romantic words's what makes your poetry one of my fav. for sure. Nice work... keep it up!

[MsJewel]

Thanks again for your kind words :) Julie

[Border]

A poem as soft as a feather on the cheeks, tickling and tingling at the same time.
Great work.
Keep writing and spreading joy. Very thoughtful selection of words, that are simple but soft.
Regards

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[KWP]

so tonight in the big Venus - Jupiter Conjunction as well as a full moon - last night and the night before these stars shone so bright - like wow - bright - I have clear skies my side and am eagerly awaiting to view tonite's magnificence - is this what the inspiration was behind your lovely words ?

[MsJewel]

Yes, the beauty of the night sky! There is nothing more lovely to inspire poetry! :) Julie

[jeannemarie coulter]

this really rocks...picture words and all...a truly fine penning...

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Do you have a book of your romantic poetry? If not you need to seriously publish one.

[MsJewel]

I have thought about publishing, but life seems to get in the way. Thank you for supporting my scribbles. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is how I use to feel. But now I have a poetry book and just released my novel.

[MsJewel]

Congratulations!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very well done, and quite romantic sonnet....shakespeare would smile...

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

oh! well done! .. puts me in the mood ;) nothing like burning true love shared ... very well done MsJewel of romance!
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[ANTO]

You set a gorgeous scene here Julie - a sonata of a sonnet filled with sumptuous imagery and myth.
May your romantic pen never fail.
well penned my friend.
:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed you give voice to the love of Venus in this eloquent and romantic sonnet Julie. It has the soft tones of such a warm moonlit encounter.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much John :) Julie

[Saddam]

Taste the sweet treasure elated lovers share
with a sultry kiss… innocence beware!

Romantic,
Passionate,
Feel it all the way.
Great as always.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Saddam]

You're most welcome dear friend...