With Love from Venus

~ a romantic sonnet ~

art ~ Venus by Laurie Blank

 

 

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Of an evening star’s sensual delight

passion gently flairs warms the dark of night

Taste the sweet treasure elated lovers share

with a sultry kiss… innocence beware!

 

Let the tender spark radiate a thrill
Can you feel me fall, will you catch me still?

Safely in the arms of beauty we set sail

heartbeats intertwine as moonbeams regale

 

Floating gracefully, softly with the ease

of a whispered breath captured on the breeze

Warmed with the desire scented of the earth
Fly sweet butterflies…true loves precious birth

 

Oh the fantasy once only dreamed of
from my heart to yours, my Adonis love

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Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Very captivating poetry you've come up with. Loved the way you turn your fantasy-visions to the analogies of love-words. Short, simple ... clear, concise & very realistic it is! I must say, Choice of words, depth of thoughts & the way you fill the page with musically romantic words's what makes your poetry one of my fav. for sure. Nice work... keep it up!

[MsJewel]

Thanks again for your kind words :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

lost for words with you stunning romatic bility Julie. Always a plasure to read.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Troy. It's always lovely to see you! :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

This os captivating... everything aligned perfectly for this romantic liaison...
Just beautiful Julie :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am star-struck by this one, Julie! With Venus and Jupiter literally aligning in the night sky, what could be more romantic than this mesmeric writing of a sonnet?

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Kelly :) Julie

[B. Maaitah]

I cannot imagine a romantic sonnet could get any more perfect than this... enjoyed it to the last stanza.. I've been parched for a masterfully written, eloquently expressed, emotionally satisfying poem... and there I have it thanks to you ! :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you for your generous review :) Julie

[dan]

Julie, No one else on WC can write a sonnet like you can. The feel of bliss floats as lightly as a bubble and as brightly as lightning. This one goes into my library with 5 stars next to it! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

You have made my day with your lovely comment and compliment Dan. Thank you :) Julie

[B]

You only know if that man loves you until you fall
Will he catch you or run

Fabulous write
such sensual romance

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet lady! :) Julie

[Dara]

A delight to read and beautifully penned as only you can do my dear friend! Nothing speaks more of romance than Venus and Adonis. Wonderful write, Julie.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much my dear friend. :) Julie

[Cory Barrett]

It's been a while since i have read your ethereal writing. Floatsome as always.

[MsJewel]

Floatsome - I like that word. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your kind comment :) Julie

[Ana B.]

An infinitely tender and smooth piece of magic from you again dear Julie :) A gorgeous write!

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet Ana :) Julie

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a wonderful sonnet capturing the essence of romance accompanied by a beautiful painting... such a delight!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

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You are kindly welcome, Julie :)