With Love from Venus

~ a romantic sonnet ~

art ~ Venus by Laurie Blank

 

 

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Of an evening star’s sensual delight

passion gently flairs warms the dark of night

Taste the sweet treasure elated lovers share

with a sultry kiss… innocence beware!

 

Let the tender spark radiate a thrill
Can you feel me fall, will you catch me still?

Safely in the arms of beauty we set sail

heartbeats intertwine as moonbeams regale

 

Floating gracefully, softly with the ease

of a whispered breath captured on the breeze

Warmed with the desire scented of the earth
Fly sweet butterflies…true loves precious birth

 

Oh the fantasy once only dreamed of
from my heart to yours, my Adonis love

~~~

 

 

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Very captivating poetry you've come up with. Loved the way you turn your fantasy-visions to the analogies of love-words. Short, simple ... clear, concise & very realistic it is! I must say, Choice of words, depth of thoughts & the way you fill the page with musically romantic words's what makes your poetry one of my fav. for sure. Nice work... keep it up!

[MsJewel]

Thanks again for your kind words :) Julie

[AquarianPoet]

Mesmerizing words that captivate the mind, and engulf the heart with the glow of love. I enjoyed your poem very much MsJewel. I look forward to reading more....

Dann :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Dann :) Julie

[AquarianPoet]

You are as welcome for them as you are deserving of them Julie. If I could write like that ...I wouldn't be single...lol

[Cassie]

Julie, you write romantic poems so well.

[Robert]

A very lovely piece here Julie, you are so talented.

[SmittyJas]

Such sweet love poetry sweet word ink slips across the pages of loves rhymes.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie, "fly sweet butterfly... true loves precious birth"
your romantic persuasion is timeless. truly, Pat
one of my favorites

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pat :) Julie

[WILDERNESS]

where on earth does such love exist.......................... only in your poems I dare say, and you take us there once in a while................ beautiful, beautiful.

[Valentine]

You are one of the most romantic people on this site. Hope you are living some of these writes. Valentine

[MsJewel]

Thank you Kathie :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Those lovers that leave us yearning.
"Oh the fantasy once only dreamed of
from my heart to yours, my Adonis love"
Beautiful artwork and amazing words for the emotion of love. We need those sparks to make us know joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[Lydia Shutter]

You write these sonnets so well, Julie. The rhythm and rhyme are flawless. The romance and sensuality flows through every line. Beautifully written. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi. Your lovely reviews mean so much to me :) Julie