Glistening

~ a romantic little scribble ~

     

                    art ~ garmash

 

 

His scent lingers on my skin

as soft as a veil morning dew

                                                     Glistening

           

When sunbeams are a whisper

and the day breathes roses

                   awakening the butterflies

                                        confetti wings fluttering

to the gentle joy of leftover dreams

 

As my mind wanders

back to the moonlit garden he so lovingly tended

 

When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream

and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze

                stealing my breath

                                       catching my skirt

weaving the night in satin stars

 

And I awaken too

surrounded with the essence

of roses and butterflies

                                     and his scent

 

as soft as morning dew

                               Glistening

 

                        

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

There is something about the painting, Julie, about the font, the color, the layout of your lines, the emotional lure and beauty that sweeps my senses up into your romantically enthralling moment, that I simply and sincerely love the enthralling sensations of.

Julie, my sensitive side seems drawn rather completely and deeply by every line and verse, but most of all to this:
"When his eyes were as bright as sunlight on a stream
and his lips were a kiss of poetry on the breeze
stealing my breath
catching my skirt
weaving the night in satin stars"

Goodness-ME!
Well, I'll close now, Julie, and thank you every-so warmly … on my way to another read.
Big hugs to you for sharing your excellent pen! ⁓ Richard

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Richard :) Julie

[Richard🖌]

Kind words?
Well, you're welcome, Julie.

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quite the gardener, Julie, to tend a moonlit garden and leave such an impression... this is beautiful poetry (not that we come to expect less), filled with the most wonderful imagery... such is the power of dreams... gorgeous!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Robert]

"And I awaken too
surrounded with the essence
of roses and butterflies
and his scent"

I really like the lines above. This is such a loving show of expression this piece is "as soft as morning dew".

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Robert. Thank you :) Julie

[dan]

Your poems creep toward the reader on softly treaded cat's feet, sneaking up on unwary emotions ready to express their delight; the sunrise twinkles on dewy foliage, winking to the upcoming day, signaling quietly "not quite!" As I'm sure I've mentioned before, I don't usually like to quote the write in my review, but a piece stood out like a lighthouse under the blanket of crashing waves: "...awakening the butterflies confetti wings fluttering..." Priceless. Another groups of shiny gems spelling the name Julie. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words Dan :) Julie

[ANTO]

Bittersweetness isnt supposed to feel this good - or is it? You call this a scribble Julie but this is - as are all your poems - masterclasses in yearning and missing loved ones in beautiful boxes of poetry.
Gorgeous. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[Rae :3]

"as soft as a veil morning dew" - love this line! amazing piece! :D

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

The color of love certainly speaks to hearts'... on purpose for the anticipation of night so as the silence of night could help spirits get glistened more... & more alongwith roses-scents.. lying next to the the tender hum of each other's awaken-heartbeats. Your romantic heart's seemed a bit philosophical here to this page. Well written!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

"the day breathes roses awakening the butterflies" what a line! Julie, there were tears glistening in my eyes when I finished reading your poignant words. A lilting lullaby of reminiscing. Lydi*

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Lydi :) Julie

[sinNsincerity]

"When sunbeams are a whisper," nicely written!

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A romantic walk with beautiful pictures you describe, very well done, Julie. I like your style. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi - I like your style as well my dear friend! :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"a kiss of poetry on the breeze/ stealing my breath"

i don't think the speaker would press charges....not for this kind of robbery.

romantic write.

you and poet2angels

you both write such tender passion.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for you lovely review Jacob :) Julie