No Escape

~ a sensual little scribble ~

 

                photo compliments of pinterest

 

 

There is no veil,

only the night between us...

the darkness clinging

 

his kiss

intoxicating to eager lips

    his face

all the beauty that I see

his hands

warmer than the slow pleasure

of the sun rising

unmasked in rapturous heat

 

my breath upon his cheek, my scent upon his skin

 

our whispers tangled in the sighs of night,

capturing

every wish and longing...

 

not a kiss,  not a look,

not a  touch

will escape

the darkness clinging…

 

 

Reviews

[Robert]

Julie,

As usual, the photograph, come on where do you find theses lovely pieces ? They a; ways go so well with your poetry. Such a sensual piece you have penned. I really enjoy the format of the piece , it flows as smoothly as the words you have written.

[MsJewel]

I find the photos online - they are almost as fun to find as writing the poem. I'm glad you enjoy them :) Julie

[Valentine]

Warm and sexy write. Funny the things one remembers when all of this is lost. Valentine

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and beautiful words.
"our whispers tangled in the sighs of night,
capturing
every wish and longing..."
Dear Julie, you left the reader with thoughts and place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful wording and thoughts... I loved it. Such a mature love and sensual romantic moment shared... one of my favorites from you. Also, love the picture... set the tone for the words :) You are too awesome Julie :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Aaron. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic sensual, sexy and romantic piece!
Your work will never get old in my opinion my dear friend:)
Wording and imagery is flawless, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Am feverishly trying to catch up with RRs after being away for a few days.I have had so few from you recently that I thought you had left. Then you post this lovely, 'Julie jewel' of sensual and erotic expression!

[MsJewel]

I took a much needed break for a few weeks - I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one John. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[....................]

I come to read your work because it is calming and always leaves me with images that linger into the day... memories can be so vivid when they are built on strong foundations of love... it is not what's said, that has the greatest impact in this piece, it is what is left unsaid that strikes the heart - a love that longs to have what once was... beautiful, Julie!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[wordman]

a beautiful love scene julie,i could almost feel the passion in your write

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[MathYouT]

This is truly impressive!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[dan]

Julie, You have such a magical way of putting the lyrics for potential love songs in such precise order to illustrate the beauty of your writes. I can write a decent love poem if I am so moved but with nowhere near the power that you inject into each one. You have a very special talent and it shines brightly with every succeeding write of yours. This one goes into my library, thank you for that! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Dan. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

You always paint such a beautiful images with your writes, this is sensual and so romantic! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

you are always welcome Julie! :)