' You find me in the dark and time slips away in a dream .. '
Such beautiful, sensual, incredible, inspiring words, wrapped in that tissue-wrapping style of yours. In a way, I feel like a voyeuse peeping from a shadow. but in no way dirty., Tis more in awe of what births such touches of glory!
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9 Years Ago
I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie
Julie, You should definitely write a textbook called "Imagery in Writing." In those early hours, devoid of colorful baubles, one can find the bare essence of reality. It is during these hours that one does such clear, uninterrupted thinking...whether about politics, the culinary arts....but mostly the love that is sprinting through your heart and mind. The clarity one can realize at these times can be startling. A very beautiful piece, Julie. This goes right into my library favorites. Thank you for that. take care...dan
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9 Years Ago
I'm humbled by your kind and generous words Dan. Thank you so much. It's good to see you back. I ho.. read moreI'm humbled by your kind and generous words Dan. Thank you so much. It's good to see you back. I hope your wife is doing better. :) Julie
Souls connected without distraction when the body is in slumberous comfort beneath warm blankets... residual love felt by the heart and relived in dreams where you fall in love all over again... a stunning piece of poetry, Julie, and a wonderful photo to accompany them... - FT
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :)Julie
The first thing I see when I scroll down is the beautiful image. Then the poem so beautifully expressed, the love for the special person is painted like another image but in your writing this time. Having that love and peace, it is so special to have and how wonderful. Nice, nice, nice.
Romantic and drowsily and delicately full of sensuality and romance Julie. You capture the time before the dam breaks and the rational of light invades with its stark reality.
To know the serenity and security of having the one you love
Beside you...... surround you....
Encompass your heart and soul
Is truly what dreams are made of. ...
And what truly wonderful poetry is inspired by.
Amazing use of words.
"you shelter me
you comfort me
you control me
you numb me
you could fool me…"
The above lines are sweet and needed. We must fall deeply into love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry dear Julie.
Coyote
I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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