More than the Sun

~ just a little scribble ~

 

                     reinfried marass photography

 

 

Where rivers run and meet the tide
quickly to rise when by your side

and overflow
                 with a stir

as breath to breath, the softest purr
leaves silky lips

my
          hearts
                         undone

and I am warm
                                  more than the sun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[ANTO]

Whoa - the intense almost melting heat when we are with 'the one' - combined with floods of emotions and the bodies physical floods - certainly chain reactions going off all over.
You are a master of understated class Julie.
Thanks for sharing this one.
:)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Anto. Thank you :) Julie

[dan]

Julie, I am smack dab in the middle of a crappy day but your soothing words, silky smooth always give me a nice jolt of contentment and joy. I've told you before that you have a gift and that we here on WC are so fortunate that you are willing to share it with us. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem Dan. I hope today is better :) Julie

[....................]

I absolutely love your little scribbles because they leave such wonderful images in the mind... there is a deep river of love in your words, Julie, and we are grateful to at least catch a glimpse of the passion that lurks beneath the rising tides... bravo :)

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoy my scribbles. Thanks so much :) Julie

[B]

I am warm more than the sun

What a wonderful poem
To find in another the love that keeps us so good within
The ultimate ecstasy of a kiss

Thank you for sharing

[~]

Oh, not only warm, I think HOT :D
lovely!

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

you rock it MS Jewel ... always thrilled to read your pages ... i sat a moment "Where rivers run and meet the tide" oh my goodness .... so full of raging passion and life ... going to google pics and vids of the occurrence ...
https://youtu.be/LoqixgRWxes
thank you for another sultry experience ... ;)
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your always encouraging comments. :) Julie

[onceloved]

You capture how beautiful scribble poetry can be and you did it so beautifully with so few words. It is more than a beautiful talent you have it is someone who has a very tender and romantic side of them Julie. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[Trace]

OK, let me guess.
On the beach again?????

You are going to get all tan and look like you just got back from Mexico or something.

OH, wait, you are going to Mexico, huh?

Look forward to seeing some pictures.

Trace

[MsJewel]

I'll miss you! Hugs, Julie

[Robert]

Nicely written piece here Julie, I particularly like the line, "as breath to breath, the softest purr
leaves silky lips". You always have such lovely pictures to go with your poetry.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Robert :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
When we find that special someone that makes us warm
and fuzzy inside everything else seems better when together:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

thank you James! :) Julie